This post outlines the peer review I conducted for Michaela Harrington's essay for the final project. Her open post to peer reviewers can be found here. I chose to evaluate the form of her essay and formed my comment on her open post to peer reviewers accordingly.
Helpfulness
In my comment on her blog, I suggested that Michaela break up some of her longer paragraphs and that she indent each paragraph so she is following the conventions of a standard college essay. Hopefully this helps her with her editing process.
Course Incorporation
As we discussed in class throughout the semester, the conventions of each genre we are authoring works in must be followed in order to meet form requirements for each project. Paragraph indentations are necessary conventions of a standard college essay.
Admiration
Michaela included a lot of relevant and well thought out information into a relatively short essay. The flow and organization are there as well.
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