My rough cut of project 3 can be accessed herehttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwUxe4UixUmubmFuVlJzc1BmVkE/view?usp=sharing.
Audience Question
I anticipate that, because I completed an almost entirely complete draft in production, I will not have a ton of work to do this week. Aside from the blog posts, I will make sure that my content is on point and that about sums up my week.
Key Information
I would like my peer reviewers to know that I am curious if they are initially for or against the decriminalization of drugs. My prediction from last week's blog posts was that my peers would likely be in favor of the solution, and I would like to see how accurate that assumption is.
Weaknesses
I think the biggest weakness my current draft has is that it does not have a title. If anyone has any ideas, feel free to let me know. However, I usually manage to pull together a decent title so I'm not stressing too much about it.
Strengths
I think my essay has solid main points to discuss. Though I may not always develop the points fully, I think the rebuttal and the arguments that I used are strong, valid points.
Hey Avalon, here's a peer review with the content suggestion activity:
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you've really developed your argument completely. You've got great arguments for what you're trying to say about the decriminalization as well as counter arguments. You've got plenty of detail, but if you wanted to develop a little more you could include more statistics that you can cite. I didn't see many citations, but most of what you did cite was correct and it would be easy to include more if you needed to. It looks good tho I don't think you'll have to do much more!